Excerpt from Book 1: When Yas discovers magic

This week I’d like to share an excerpt from the first book, The Battle for the Peacekeepers, when Yas discovers magic.

As you’ll see, she literally falls through a portal and it’s a key discovery point for Yas. She starts to realise that not everything in the world as is normal and mundane as she thought…

Excerpt: When Yas discovers magic is real

Yas remembered the book McVale (her employer) had mentioned, the gift from her grandpa. She wanted to have a look and now was the perfect opportunity.

She walked to the back of the shop and grabbed the kick-step. She moved it and nonchalantly stepped up on top of it. As she did so, she felt something brush past her leg, like a draft of air, yet more substantial. It startled her and made her step one foot back down.

There was no bell tinkle, so she knew it wasn’t the front door. She looked around her. There on the floor near her foot was a yellow leaf, about three inches long. It looked too large to have been tracked in on the bottom of someone’s shoe, yet too far from the door to have been blown in. No matter, she figured. It wasn’t important. She’d put it away in a moment.

She took a step back up and reached for the top shelf. Immediately, her head felt a little light and she could have sworn she heard someone call out “Psst.” She stopped still, reaching out to the shelves to steady herself.

 “Hello?” she called nervously, looking left and right around her. Had someone sneaked in without her being aware?

She strained her ears to hear. Nothing. Only the electric buzzing of the lights overhead. Odd, but not overly suspicious, she returned her mind and eyes to the task. She reached up, to grab the book. Her hand on the shelf should have given her more stability, but it started to vibrate under her touch. The original sense of movement also returned, this time for longer. She glanced down. Her light headedness made the floor seem much further away.

The shelves too started to move, and her hold was more akin to a sponge than a solid piece of wood. The intensity increased, vibrating, much like a truck passing outside, except deeper and stronger. The bookshelves started to wobble in front of her eyes, and she swayed backwards and forwards in response. Yas moved her right hand to gain a solid grasp of the book, but in doing so, her left hand was absorbed inwards to the shelf. It pulled her forwards and off balance. She cried out in alarm, and then stopped and tried to regain her composure. Perhaps this was another mild earthquake she figured, but the sponge like shelves indicated that this was something more. She wasn’t sure whether to try and step down or stay put.

The vibration increased in intensity. Now a deep roar, it was accompanied by more movement of the shelves. In her head, the sound was like a swarm of angry bees, but deeper, and which vibrated through every fibre of her being. A headache appeared behind her eyes, with flashing lights. It was the type she remembered from her younger years. That worried her. She wasn’t sure if what she was seeing around her was the result of distorted vision or really there. The bookshelves now also seemed to be swaying back and forth. They were fluid, instead of fixed, the shapes changing. The books were sliding backwards and forwards and taking on this sponge like fluidity, also. She felt nauseous and was going to hurl at any moment.

She made a move to step down. As she did so, there was a new sound, like a ‘whoomph’, and the air changed around her. Whether related to the migraine she thought was arriving she did not know, but ultimately, the floor was not where her foot expected it to be. That coupled with her left hand not finding the solid purchase she was looking for, she lost her balance. The top half of her body wanted to fall further forwards, so she leaned backwards to counteract that, hoping to find the floor. The floor wasn’t anywhere close, so she started to fall backwards, flailing with her hands for some other grip. She shrieked out in alarm, both bracing herself for a hard landing while also looking around herself in desperation for something to grab onto. She had a split-second image of herself landing heavily on one foot and then limping around the shop the rest of the day. To her surprise, there was no such landing.

Instead, where there should have been a dark blue carpet with small orange diamond motif pattern, she seemed to fall much further. Into what, she did not know. The world around her turned darker and the air smelled different, an outside smell. She heard and felt herself smashing through leaves and slender branches, until two limbs caught and held her, firm but not rough. The limbs creaked and cracked as she was lowered gently to touch the mossy ground below. Then they let go slowly. She realised that her fall had ended, and she was laying on her back, on damp, cold grass.

What happens after Yas discovers magic?

Hopefully, I’ve whetted your appetite and you want to read more. To see how the story continues, please check out the link below to view and buy book 1 (The Battle for the Peacekeepers) on Amazon.

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Who is Yas? Strong yet open-minded rebel.

There’s a short and longer answer to the question of ‘Who is Yas’ and why her character is written the way it is.

What I’d like to share is why I decided to write a lead female character who is independent, has firm beliefs, is open-minded, sensitive and has a rebellious streak.

Confused? Hopefully I can explain.

Motivations

The motivations and significance of Yas come from books and television shows and movies that I grew up with. I loved storylines that presented female characters as other than the sidekick who turned to their male counterpart when the going became rough.

A particular irritation was the Golden Gate bridge scene in the James Bond movie ‘A View to a Kill’ where Bond’s female companion was stranded, in stiletto heels, on the bridge supports while screaming for help.

In contrast there were characters such as Wonder Woman and Colonel Wilma Deering from Buck Rogers in the 25th Century. Yes, they still bowed to their male counterparts in some situations, but for the most part these characters broke the mold of how starring females were presented at the time. They were independent, able to get themselves out of trouble (and more importantly not in it to being with) and were able to be more thoughtful and compassionate in the process.

As a side note, I’m not going to age myself by giving any time periods here, you can probably come up with a rough guess based on the references!

How I decided to introduce Yas

Fast forward to me starting to write the first Word Guardians book and I knew I wanted the lead character in the first book to be a strong female. Strong, rebellious, yet sensitive and open minded. And I figured that a way to bring all that together was to write a storyline where she pretty much figured out she knew what life was about, and then had all of that questioned through a series of events with her best friend, Sam (I’ll talk more about him in a later blog post).

So, giving away a few details from the first book, The Battle for the Peacekeepers, she’s strong minded, not interested in being popular, and is different to others at her school. She also has a strong belief that there’s no magic in the world whereas Sam begs to differ. His dad has disappeared and he’s holding onto the belief that he’s stuck in a realm.

Yas reasons this out as Sam refusing to accept the possibility that his dad may not be coming back, so treads carefully trying not to encourage his optimism while also not delivering what she thinks has actually happened. All of this combined is what draws Sam to her (you’ll have to read the book to see how their friendship develops).

So, who is Yas?

Very quickly, Yas is presented with irrefutable truth that magic and realms do exist. Now, she could have handled this a different way, but she’s tired of dealing with secrets in her own family and not having anyone to talk to. Ultimately, her open-mindedness, inward questioning and humility enables her to confess that she was wrong to Sam. It galvanises their friendship and starts the duo on their adventures together.

Finally, how Yas handles the climax of the battle in the first book is also testament to her character. She’s conflicted, yet sure headed enough to intuitively know what she needs to do when the moment comes. As a reader too, you get to understand some of her inner exploration as she reaches this point and the ethics that I mentioned in The Worlds of the Word Guardians) also play into this.

So, hopefully, I’ve explained who Yas is and the significance of her character while also not giving away any spoilers. If you’d like to learn more about the book series, please check out the link below.

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